Wonka

NAgrappler140 · 07-07-2008, 12:31 AM

New one -

[Mod] · #2 07-09-2008, 08:31 PM

Not too bad....pretty good. I like how u made such hard contrasts in light to dark.

p s y k 0 . · #3 07-10-2008, 02:24 AM

Get rid of his hands and the faces at the bottom, its throwing off the focus, and take out the text. Other than that, nice.

PmC* · #4 07-10-2008, 09:42 AM

I am taking out the text. But the other stuff stays.

They can stay because they go with the flow, so therefore it still draws your attention to the main focal; since it's the beginning/center of the flow

[Mod] · #5 07-10-2008, 01:25 PM

Ya....I was thinking about the text...its kind of random. Too small (hard to see) and the backwards one loox a tad off.....maybe becuz its bacwards idk (I know ur goin for the reflection thing). I would just eliminate the text.

I like the hands....they add to the elemnt of like.....HEY LOOK AT ME.
The faces on the bottom seem a bit misplaced as well.
Maybe make em a tad bit darker....so they dont draw away from the main image.

Just sum more opinons from me.
:P